I like the simple style of animation but
A LITTLE TOO SHORT MAN! JK
The animation is a little weird. The story is just okay but I don't know if drama is subjective just like humor but this did not feel like drama. So in conclusion, you need to work on your 3D animation and make it a little bit more dramatic.
The art is okay, in fact,the drawings look good but the animation is weird . The music is really irritating I cannot read the subtitles. The story is just okay, meh but okay. I don't get the "jokes" though. All in all, improve on your animation style. Okay?
Thanks for the critique!
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