I like the simple style of animation but
A LITTLE TOO SHORT MAN! JK
The animation is a little weird. The story is just okay but I don't know if drama is subjective just like humor but this did not feel like drama. So in conclusion, you need to work on your 3D animation and make it a little bit more dramatic.
The art is okay, in fact,the drawings look good but the animation is weird . The music is really irritating I cannot read the subtitles. The story is just okay, meh but okay. I don't get the "jokes" though. All in all, improve on your animation style. Okay?
Thanks for the critique!
The Animation is smooth, I'll give you that but you need to add timing and anticipation. It looks mechanical without those two. For example, the stick figure throwing the circle thing doesn't look natural, another example the circle thing looks like it is flowing through the air.
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